[GPSCC-chat] sticker slogan against predatory banks?
Spencer Graves
spencer.graves at structuremonitoring.com
Sat Jan 8 17:17:13 PST 2011
Hello:
Might you have brain cells available to help brainstorm a
headline / sticker slogan against predatory banks.
At the Green meeting last Wednesday, someone suggested we needed
such. The following summarizes my thoughts at the moment:
Just Say 'No' to Corrupt Banks.
Just Say 'No' to Predatory Banks.
Just Say 'No' to Corrupt Bankers, Politicians, Media.
No Credit Card Debt: Just say 'No' to corrupt bankers, politicians, media.
No Illegal Foreclosures.
No Illegal Foreclosures, No Credit Card Debt.
Beyond this, what do you suggest I do to reduce the reading level
required to parse the prose I write? Someone (Cameron?) said we also
needed a "low literacy version" of literature. Per his suggestion, I
deleted "ostensibly" from my draft brochure. I can work harder to write
shorter sentences with simpler grammar and avoid long and obscure
words. If there are other things I should be doing, please let me know.
Best Wishes,
Spencer
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Spencer Graves, PE, PhD
President and Chief Operating Officer
Structure Inspection and Monitoring, Inc.
751 Emerson Ct.
San José, CA 95126
ph: 408-655-4567
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