[GPSCC-chat] credit unions

[Jim Stauffer]

I like this idea and commend Spencer for taking the initiative on it. But, 
writing composition does not appear to be one of his better skills. There are 
several errors in grammar, diction, punctuation, and format in this brochure.

A good idea must also be presented well to be taken seriously. A presentation 
that does not display professionalism causes the reader to doubt the 
credibility of the subject being presented.

There are a few people in this Local with good writing skills. I'm one of 
them. I could help out, but not immediately. Is anybody else available? If 
not, I'd recommend postponing this for a week or two until someone can lend 
the writing skills needed to make this good idea into a presentation that will 
convince its intended audience.

Jim S.





On 11/28/2010 4:14 PM, spencerg wrote:
> Hello, All:
>
>
> Attached please find an update to the draft "Abusive Banks" brochure. Thanks
> to Jim Doyle, who suggested changes, which were not all implemented verbatim.
>
>
> This version puts the Green party logo and Santa Clara Greens PO box number on
> panel 4, but no phone number nor email address. I'd like to see at least one
> of these two added, but we don't have consensus on that yet.
>
>
> Current deadline: Tuesday, Nov. 30, so it can be printed in time for the
> potluck Thursday, Dec. 2.
>
>
> Comments?
> Best Wishes,
> Spencer
>
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> What contact information should we have on this tri-fold on "Abusive Banks"?
>
>
> Attached please find a draft in *.pdf format. It ends with a Green party logo
> and the Santa Clara Greens web site. I could add my name and / or anyone
> else's plus an email address. I hesistate to add my own email address. Do the
> Santa Clara Greens have an email, something like, "info at cagreens.org"?
>
>
> Should this brochure mention the Dec. 7 protests? The current verbiage does
> but recommends something more methodical that would involve less risk and have
> a comparable (maybe larger) impact long term.
>
>
> There is space for more information, but I'm not ready to fill that space
> right now.
>
>
> Best Wishes,
> Spencer
>
>
> On 11/27/2010 2:26 PM, Wes Rolley wrote:
>> On 11/27/2010 12:32 PM, spencerg wrote:
>>> Hi, Jim: Thanks. I'll add Provident to my list of locals. Anything
>>> else, e.g., what you like or don't of different credit unions, how
>>> should someone select one over another? Spencer
>>>
>> I ended up in Merriwest after the IBM Employeed FCU was absorbed.
>> Service is good except for home mortgage. Like every other small
>> bank, they have to sell the load and you don't even know who holds it
>> now.
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